Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour


Submitted on
November 8, 2012
Image Size
8.6 MB


681 (who?)
Teen's Play Issue 1 Page 14 by LiyuConberma Teen's Play Issue 1 Page 14 by LiyuConberma
OK! I have updated. Sorry if it's only one page, but I have decided to take my drawings one at a time, and hopefully I could get myself update an artwork once a week.

OH, and guess what? I had watched Wreck-It Ralph, and I LUV IT!! >w< Even though Sonic appeared only a few times, I guess it's a nice start, I bet my guts that Sonic will have his own movie very soon.

Previous Pages:

Next Pages:

What do you think? Don't think! COMMENT! More importantly, DON'T FLAMES ON ME! >_<

Sonic, Shadow, and Silver the Hedgehogs belong to :iconsegaplz:

Darren the Hedgehog, and Trails the Three-tailed Wolf belong to me :iconliyuconberma:
Add a Comment:
It's Wonderful :D
You'd really, (I actually mean this by the way)
REALLY would have a great future working as a comic artist or at least making comics :D

You have the right "eye" for the story writing, coloring, technique and a very high skill level.

You really should go for that :D
That is if you'd actually want to put yourself up for that kind of a work, I'd really recommend that :D

You have everything needed to make comics, and that's the truth I tell ya.
Don't even try and tell me that I'm wrong about that XD
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
55 out of 57 deviants thought this was fair.

I really like this comic! You are a really good artist and I like your style of work! You do really well on coloring and shading. However, what I want to say is backround. I know that backgrounds are annoyingly hard and I can understand your reason for not doing alot of background. But you should maybe try for a bit mor more background to set the scene. In the case for this page, I would perhaps add some floorboards or stone to make it look like a workshop as shown a few pages before. Work on some simple backgrounds and lets see what you can do!
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
26 out of 28 deviants thought this was fair.

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

Your art work is just outstanding! You are so talented.
GoldAnaf Mar 22, 2014  New member Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't know why, but i think that the guy that looks like Shadow is the typical bad uncle
This page is just soooo...

LiyuConberma Aug 24, 2013  Student General Artist
Just telling the  tru-uth!🎶🎤

Don't forget your copyrights!
Hi. I love so your comic of Teens play and Childrens Play. Im a big fan of yours:D (Big Grin) 
LiyuConberma Aug 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks, glad that you lke them. ^^
I Love the comic... When are you going to do more?... I have to Know more of them and what its going to happen with them.:D (Big Grin) 
LiyuConberma Aug 28, 2013  Student General Artist
Don't worry, there will be more/
THANX. Ill LOVE them. 
Add a Comment: