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Teen's Play Issue 1 Page 14 by LiyuConberma Teen's Play Issue 1 Page 14 by LiyuConberma
OK! I have updated. Sorry if it's only one page, but I have decided to take my drawings one at a time, and hopefully I could get myself update an artwork once a week.

OH, and guess what? I had watched Wreck-It Ralph, and I LUV IT!! >w< Even though Sonic appeared only a few times, I guess it's a nice start, I bet my guts that Sonic will have his own movie very soon.


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What do you think? Don't think! COMMENT! More importantly, DON'T FLAMES ON ME! >_<


Sonic, Shadow, and Silver the Hedgehogs belong to :iconsegaplz:

Darren the Hedgehog, and Trails the Three-tailed Wolf belong to me :iconliyuconberma:
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It's Wonderful :D
You'd really, (I actually mean this by the way)
REALLY would have a great future working as a comic artist or at least making comics :D

You have the right "eye" for the story writing, coloring, technique and a very high skill level.

You really should go for that :D
That is if you'd actually want to put yourself up for that kind of a work, I'd really recommend that :D

You have everything needed to make comics, and that's the truth I tell ya.
Don't even try and tell me that I'm wrong about that XD
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Critique by JLflower678 Jan 8, 2013, 10:54:28 AM
I really like this comic! You are a really good artist and I like your style of work! You do really well on coloring and shading. However, what I want to say is backround. I know that backgrounds are annoyingly hard and I can understand your reason for not doing alot of background. But you should maybe try for a bit mor more background to set the scene. In the case for this page, I would perhaps add some floorboards or stone to make it look like a workshop as shown a few pages before. Work on some simple backgrounds and lets see what you can do!
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:iconprincessrachelblueo:
PrincessRachelBlueo Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Never mind, I thought he would
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:iconeggmanhater:
EggmanHater Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015  Student General Artist
XD 1st panel!
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:iconscourgemightyfan:
scourgemightyfan Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hey yur right, SONY is working on a Sonic the Hedgehog movie
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:iconbashertheuc:
BasherTheUC Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
That Darren character reminds me of Black Doom. Awesome comic.
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2015  Student General Artist
Because he is Black Doom XD
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:iconbashertheuc:
BasherTheUC Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh Noes! > Nuu > I think I've fainted. I didnt see that coming. In your comic he acts different than in the game (Shadow The Hedgehog)
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Sonicteers Featured By Owner Edited Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Alternate version:

Shadow:no.

Darren:very we-

Sonic:You sure look familiar though.

Silver: in fact, this whole place looks familiar

Shadow: no it dosent.

Sonic: shadow, You've had amnesia like what, 3 times now? I'm pretty sure you have a memory loss problem.

Darren: *just kinda froze when sonic said that he looks familiar*

Sonic: I swear i know you from somewhere, *thinking really hard* Doesn't your name start with a d?

Darren: Yes...
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Student General Artist
It's not bad. But I will put the whole deja vu later in the story.
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Sonicteers Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
k.
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:iconcubester64:
Cubester64 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
Took two years, but a Sonic movie was announced.
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Student General Artist
REALLY???!!
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:iconcubester64:
Cubester64 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
Yeah. It's going to be made by Sony Pictures.
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Student General Artist
no way, when will it be released, are they gonna their look?? hopefully not...
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:iconcubester64:
Cubester64 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
I really don't know a whole lot about it. I did find an article(www.hollywoodreporter.com/heat…  ), and also I know Black Nerd Comedy did a video on it. It is a cgi/ live action hybrid, so it will probably suck.Gloomy 
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Student General Artist
yea, I'm disappointed at that fact, man...
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:iconministevek:
MiniSteveK Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
Your art work is just outstanding! You are so talented.
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Student General Artist
Aww, thanks!
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:iconministevek:
MiniSteveK Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
Awww, no problem at all. You deserve the praise.Huggle! 
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:icongoldanaf:
GoldAnaf Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't know why, but i think that the guy that looks like Shadow is the typical bad uncle
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Student General Artist
Well, he's not bad...yet.
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:iconhey-adraude:
Hey-adraude Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
This page is just soooo...




AAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMAAAAAAAZZZZZIIIIIIINNNNNNNNGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks!
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:iconhey-adraude:
Hey-adraude Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013
Just telling the  tru-uth!🎶🎤

*LiyuConberma™
Don't forget your copyrights!
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tailsnoe Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
Hi. I love so your comic of Teens play and Childrens Play. Im a big fan of yours:D (Big Grin) 
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks, glad that you lke them. ^^
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:icontailsnoe:
tailsnoe Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013
I Love the comic... When are you going to do more?... I have to Know more of them and what its going to happen with them.:D (Big Grin) 
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Student General Artist
Don't worry, there will be more/
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:icontailsnoe:
tailsnoe Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013
THANX. Ill LOVE them. 
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:iconbooglybear:
booglybear Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013   Traditional Artist
This comic is beyond amazing!
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:iconamnesiaundead:
AmnesiaUndead Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Professional Artisan Crafter
that look like his dad
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Student General Artist
actually it's their uncle.
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:iconmgartist:
MGartist Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Student General Artist
"Don't flames on me! >_<"
Who would post nasty comments? The comic is really good and you're very talented in drawing/writing.
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Aww, thanks!
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:iconmgartist:
MGartist Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Student General Artist
You're welcome. :)
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wolfpup9404 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013
Shadows face on this page always makes me laugh but....I do wonder why Silver didn't say anything while the other two did.
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Well, he is thinking something, more in his own deep thought.
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:iconwolfpup9404:
wolfpup9404 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013
It's just... Silvers been really quiet though most of this. That doesn't really seem like him.
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:iconsilvershadowfan-920:
SilverShadowFan-920 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
You will do next page? ;)
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Yep
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SilverShadowFan-920 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
@3@ :heart:
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:iconfluffythehedgehog12:
fluffythehedgehog12 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
EVEN IF IT IS IN BLACK AND WHITE, PLEASE MAKE MOAR PLZZZ!!! X333
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Student General Artist
I will, don't worry!
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fluffythehedgehog12 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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:iconsuperhedgehogirls:
SuperHedgehogirls Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WHEN DOES DA NEXT PG COME OUT?
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Gotta be in July
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:iconsuperhedgehogirls:
SuperHedgehogirls Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
CANT WAIT!! xD
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:icondrtwobrainsfan24:
Drtwobrainsfan24 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Whens the next page?
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Gotta be in July
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:icondrtwobrainsfan24:
Drtwobrainsfan24 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
ok
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scratchEP Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
very cool
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