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Teen's Play Issue 1 Page 12-13 by LiyuConberma Teen's Play Issue 1 Page 12-13 by LiyuConberma
Finally, the new PAGES!!! Hope you like it and I promise to upload the others ASAP! ^^

And also thank you for the comments on my latest pics/comic on Silvaze couple those small projects. Though I must admit, I got a bit rusty on drawing Blaze, it's been a while...Heheh...^^|||

Well, anyway, hope you like these pages and satisfy you for a moment!

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What do you think? Don't think! COMMENT! More importantly, DON'T FLAMES ON ME! >_<

Sonic, Shadow, and Silver the Hedgehogs belong to :iconsegaplz:

Kaze, Sapphire, Darren, and Trails belong to me :iconliyuconberma:
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i loved this!the ways you show movement,anger,and whatever else is absolutely amaziing! It sort of gave a cliffhanger.."do you know who am I?" love it~!Shadow`s looks like,"hmm..let me think on it.."
LOL XDD anyway, simply amazing once again,you did so good with shading and i do say this is something you don`t see every day:instead of eyes glowing red they`re a yellowish color..
Cool! I like it! On the bottom left box,Shadow has a nice cringed face on, LOL
So,will Shadow know or will he be stupid with his amnesia?THE WORLD MAY NEVER KNOW.. untill next time,of course.. bye - bye!
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i must say one thing first off all - the way you paint the shadows by mixing soft and hard contrast can be described in one word. great!!! by doing that gives more depth and realistic feeling.

the characters face expression and body position are just perfect! you done everything in max there - but i notes something on Shadow and Darren.
shadows eye on the last frame at page 12. it looks weird. i've seen several arts were the artist paint like that but i don't like ti. i'll rather paint the opening of the eye on the cheek instead - like when their eyebrow are down. i just thinks it's looks better.
and with darren in page 12 on frame 3, i notes his hand was painted the wrong way. when you touched your head comes the pinky naturally in front. no worries i don't know how many times i've done the same thing as you.

over all - the line and coloring are perfect. the pose and expression are just lovely. the background... i miss that. it looks okay with the color you used but i like to see more of were they are.
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Foremem Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Darrens line at the bottom right has the last two words: it should read "who I am" not "Who am I"
OutOfGrace Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
English isn't this persons first language. I believe Chinese is.
Foremem Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
I wasn't saying it to be a grammar nazi, I was just saying it because it could be fixed rather quickly if she feels like it.
ironhead1234 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014
funny has hell. trails is really going to get it later.
Sombriel Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
OOOOO The Children are from another Dimension. no?
Shadowchan14 Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Poor trails
littleshing123 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014
Page 13, 2nd panel to the left: LOL! Poor Trails, I'd REALLY hate to be him right now.
soulalchemist002 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Student General Artist… I could imagine 
Darren screaming like this xDD
zoraarmorlink Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2014
either that or Vegeta's rage breaking in DBZA
xr66 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Student Photographer
cool :D (Big Grin) 
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