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Teen's Play Issue 1 Page 12-13 by LiyuConberma Teen's Play Issue 1 Page 12-13 by LiyuConberma
Finally, the new PAGES!!! Hope you like it and I promise to upload the others ASAP! ^^

And also thank you for the comments on my latest pics/comic on Silvaze couple those small projects. Though I must admit, I got a bit rusty on drawing Blaze, it's been a while...Heheh...^^|||

Well, anyway, hope you like these pages and satisfy you for a moment!




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What do you think? Don't think! COMMENT! More importantly, DON'T FLAMES ON ME! >_<






Sonic, Shadow, and Silver the Hedgehogs belong to :iconsegaplz:

Kaze, Sapphire, Darren, and Trails belong to me :iconliyuconberma:
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:iconsegaandsonicbuddy:
i loved this!the ways you show movement,anger,and whatever else is absolutely amaziing! It sort of gave a cliffhanger.."do you know who am I?" love it~!Shadow`s looks like,"hmm..let me think on it.."
LOL XDD anyway, simply amazing once again,you did so good with shading and i do say this is something you don`t see every day:instead of eyes glowing red they`re a yellowish color..
Cool! I like it! On the bottom left box,Shadow has a nice cringed face on, LOL
So,will Shadow know or will he be stupid with his amnesia?THE WORLD MAY NEVER KNOW.. untill next time,of course.. bye - bye!
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i must say one thing first off all - the way you paint the shadows by mixing soft and hard contrast can be described in one word. great!!! by doing that gives more depth and realistic feeling.

the characters face expression and body position are just perfect! you done everything in max there - but i notes something on Shadow and Darren.
shadows eye on the last frame at page 12. it looks weird. i've seen several arts were the artist paint like that but i don't like ti. i'll rather paint the opening of the eye on the cheek instead - like when their eyebrow are down. i just thinks it's looks better.
and with darren in page 12 on frame 3, i notes his hand was painted the wrong way. when you touched your head comes the pinky naturally in front. no worries i don't know how many times i've done the same thing as you.

over all - the line and coloring are perfect. the pose and expression are just lovely. the background... i miss that. it looks okay with the color you used but i like to see more of were they are.
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:iconforemem:
Foremem Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Darrens line at the bottom right has the last two words: it should read "who I am" not "Who am I"
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:iconoutofgrace:
OutOfGrace Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
English isn't this persons first language. I believe Chinese is.
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:iconforemem:
Foremem Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
I wasn't saying it to be a grammar nazi, I was just saying it because it could be fixed rather quickly if she feels like it.
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:iconironhead1234:
ironhead1234 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014
funny has hell. trails is really going to get it later.
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:iconsombriel:
Sombriel Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
OOOOO The Children are from another Dimension. no?
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:iconshadowchan14:
Shadowchan14 Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Poor trails
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:iconlittleshing123:
littleshing123 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014
Page 13, 2nd panel to the left: LOL! Poor Trails, I'd REALLY hate to be him right now.
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:iconsoulalchemist002:
soulalchemist002 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Student General Artist
www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z_vxMg… I could imagine 
Darren screaming like this xDD
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:iconasianaquaice:
Asianaquaice Featured By Owner Edited 22 hours ago  New member Student Traditional Artist
I totally agree with u :D
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:iconzoraarmorlink:
zoraarmorlink Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2014
either that or Vegeta's rage breaking in DBZA
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:iconxr66:
xr66 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Student Photographer
cool :D (Big Grin) 
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:iconegyptiangoddesses:
EgyptianGoddesses Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
hahahahahaha i loe darran he is funny when he gets mad with trails but i am sorry for him that eye would get me scared to death too nice job i hope you make more
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Student General Artist
I know, thats my intention and that's one of Darren's way of parenting.
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:iconegyptiangoddesses:
EgyptianGoddesses Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013
oh so that fox is his son how is he his son in the first place and tell you he is really good at parenting his kid
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:iconelementalhybrid:
ElementalHybrid Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist
All: He's mad.

Me::iconnorlyplz:
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:iconmgartist:
MGartist Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Student General Artist
I pictured black doom's video game voice in the second panel of page 13.
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:iconlittleshing123:
littleshing123 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014
Now that you mention it, I didn't notice that Darren's eye on his forehead was like Black Doom.

I that it was just for show or something like that...
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:iconmgartist:
MGartist Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Student General Artist
I think liyuconberma mentioned that Darren is (or will become black doom) within her comments or journal entries somewhere... Now that I think of it, I think it was in one of her stand alone Darren drawings where she mentioned this.
Darren being Black Doom is one of the reasons why Darren is my favorite character in this fan comic, I love sci-fi/alien characters! And I'm curious if she'll have Darren become Black Doom in her comic in the future or something, it would be interesting to see how the personality of the character changes and such.
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:iconlittleshing123:
littleshing123 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
I know, me too! And I REALLY don't want to be Trails right now, if you know what I mean...

(Pg. 13, 2nd panel on the left) XD
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Close, only not entirely with the voice. A little bit normal tone, if you know what I mean.
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:iconsonicdude87:
SonicDude87 Featured By Owner May 8, 2013
Shadow vs Black Shadow Doom. Galaxies will cease to exist. It's like two Chuck Norris roundhouse kicks connecting.
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Student General Artist
^w^
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:iconhusky106:
Husky106 Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love Darren's reaction when he walks away for a moment and screams! Lol!!!!
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks. I like that part too!
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:iconbingothecat:
BingotheCat Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"I'm doomed..."

Loved it. It's been ages since I've seen any updates of these comics, but these pages have been worth the wait! :)
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Sorry for the wait, crazy college works.
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:iconchucelia:
Chucelia Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
It has only been one day and it feels like a month waiting for your knew comics and story you should get a close fan or friend to help you or something
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Student General Artist
yea, sry about that. but i often find hard to put trust on someone else or get the picture right. not to mention, i got a pile of college school works to do, so sry about that. i am drawing as fast as i can.
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:iconnoelani4:
noelani4 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm surprised that shadow didn't recognize the 3ed eye to be honest.
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student General Artist
well, they have seen so many weird stuff, so the third eye wasn't the thing (well, maybe a little) that caught his attention.
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:iconnoelani4:
noelani4 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
good point.
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:icon1tailnaruto:
1tailnaruto Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
It's a shame the fanbase can make more intresting comics than Archie themselves.
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student General Artist
Well, who knows? Maybe they can be official one day.
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:icon1tailnaruto:
1tailnaruto Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
Hopefully, these Sonic Comics are just boring and predictable.
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:icondarkdeathqueen:
Darkdeathqueen Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a great Comic! I can't wait for the other pages~! ^^
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks!
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:icondarkdeathqueen:
Darkdeathqueen Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem, your art is amazing! I'm not so good a colors, I'm better at black and white sketches.
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Just keep practicing, I didn't do well with colors at the beginning, you can compared them with my works between nowadays and 4 years ago.
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:icondarkdeathqueen:
Darkdeathqueen Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I've only started to draw this year,I didn't think I would do this well...^^
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Like I said again, practice makes perfect. ^^
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:icondarkdeathqueen:
Darkdeathqueen Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, I'll try my best.
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:icondiamondrose9991:
DiamondRose9991 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sonic, Silver, Shadow: he mad

Trails: i dont need u three to know tht!

hahahahahaha XD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student General Artist
lol, huh? ^^
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:iconweatherus1549:
WeatherUS1549 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
Boy this is getting interesting!
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:iconcrimsonthunder2010:
CrimsonThunder2010 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
Esta lindo el comic. Por que no lo continuas? Me gustaria saber que sigue ahora que Sonic, Shadow y Silver fueron enviados a otra dimension, al igual que sus contrapartes
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Sry, english, please. I can only understand english and chinese. ^^|||
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:iconcrimsonthunder2010:
CrimsonThunder2010 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
I said that I would like you continue the story. It's gettin' very intreresting. ^^
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks!
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:iconstrawberrysquirrel:
StrawberrySquirrel Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
Yaaaaaaaaay! More please!
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Student General Artist
I will!
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