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Time of Blast-Chapter 3

Chapter 4. Mission
Time of Blast
By Arecus. Conberma

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While they were waiting for the mysterious white tigress awake, Shifu asked everyone to gather around the Moon Pool for a discussion except for Mei Ling who would stay beside the white feline until she woke up.

The Furious Five and the Dragon Warrior were waiting for their master to speak, Shifu didn't look well though. He circled himself as he had a trouble in his mind, and if he did this act, it meant that was something bad or terrible happened.

Finally, Master Tigress rose the question, "Master, is there something wrong?"

"Yes, Tigress. Very wrong." Shifu replied, there was fru

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FINALLY! I have succeed!! Sorry if it's too short for you, but this is just for the experiment. And I promise the next one will be longer and this time the main couple is Leo x Karai *squeal* >w< (I love this couple so much, I have my eyes on them before Donnie x April ^///^)

Anyway, sorry for those commission that I didn't hand them on time. Even I'm in the middle of the break, but the assignments are really killing me here. The teachers show no mercy, but what the heck, you gotta do what you gotta do. Making a dream comes true has to go through all these tests, am I right?

Nevertheless, hope you enjoy this little manga and leave any comment or suggestions in order to get myself improve and do better.

OH, I also want to thank

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THANK YOU!!!

And of course, you guys are one of my great moral support. And without you, I wouldn't continue my works on dA! I salute you!!!

NOTE: I hopefully can upload some Sonic works here, and please try to understand my situation.

Drawn and story by me

belongs to Mirage Studio and Nickelodeon!!

Critique by ~SuzakuAkatsuki09 Apr 23, 2013, 9:12:05 PM

The design was structured well and flowed, so the reader, (such as myself) was immersed in the story. I support this couple in the Nickelodeon series, so I absolutely loved the plot of this short comic. The art is very good, reminded me of the Japanese manga style, with the character's expressions and gestures, which is a nice flourish because the series on Nickelodeon also incorporates manga-style expressions and emotional gestures. Kudos to you for taking the time to learn the tutorial and putting in the effort on making this online comic. Keep up the good work, I'm watching you for the future LeoxKarai comic!

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Critique by *FoxKid1302 Mar 2, 2013, 8:35:32 AM

It's short, but the structure of each page is quite solid. The flow of the story isn't interrupted by disordered panel. I have no comment on the design and the drawing skill, since every lines seem to flow from an endless stream.

There's many opinion that support and against this couple, since the new series made it so obvious some people can't stand it, and I admit I'm one of them. But the subtlety in this one-shot had subdued it tremendously. a teenage love story doesn't have to be obvious to be cute and attractive. For those who support this couple, it'd quench their thirst for the couple's lovely moments...