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February 27, 2013
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FINALLY! I have succeed!! Sorry if it's too short for you, but this is just for the experiment. And I promise the next one will be longer and this time the main couple is Leo x Karai *squeal* >w< (I love this couple so much, I have my eyes on them before Donnie x April ^///^)

Anyway, sorry for those commission that I didn't hand them on time. Even I'm in the middle of the break, but the assignments are really killing me here. The teachers show no mercy, but what the heck, you gotta do what you gotta do. Making a dream comes true has to go through all these tests, am I right?

Nevertheless, hope you enjoy this little manga and leave any comment or suggestions in order to get myself improve and do better.

OH, I also want to thank :iconyuumei:'s tutorial of making a flash comic: THANK YOU!!!

And of course, you guys are one of my great moral support. And without you, I wouldn't continue my works on dA! I salute you!!!

NOTE: I hopefully can upload some Sonic works here, and please try to understand my situation.


Drawn and story by me :iconliyuconberma:

:icontmntplz: belongs to Mirage Studio and Nickelodeon!!
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:iconimatmntgal:
i absolutely love it! i mean it may have been short and let us wandering appen but it was amazing! i think it was good for a first one and i cannot wait to see your sequel for leonardo and karai! i really enjoyed it and such and i hope others do too! i think you should try giving the leo and karai one some ystery not as much as donnie and april because leo and karai are a mysterious couple but donnie and april are well liked. i am just so exited for the next one so do hurry!
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It's short, but the structure of each page is quite solid. The flow of the story isn't interrupted by disordered panel. I have no comment on the design and the drawing skill, since every lines seem to flow from an endless stream.

There's many opinion that support and against this couple, since the new series made it so obvious some people can't stand it, and I admit I'm one of them. But the subtlety in this one-shot had subdued it tremendously. a teenage love story doesn't have to be obvious to be cute and attractive. For those who support this couple, it'd quench their thirst for the couple's lovely moments...
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vinnievannwham Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
For some reason this won't come up on my phone. Is there any other way of me seeing this please?
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LiyuConberma Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Student General Artist
Because it's swf file, so your phone can't read it. But i posted them as jpgs on my tumblr: liyuconberma.tumblr.com
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LittleGirlnin64 Featured By Owner 5 days ago
I FREAKING LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUR WORKK!!!! SQUEAL!!! U captured Donnie and April so perfectly that I have already read this over a zillion times! And I only discovered your stuff today!! GREAT JOB! <3
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Snowflakeswin Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
Moreplease?
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Snowflakeswin Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
More. Make more or I will find you.
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iloveonceler88 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh my gosh that was SO cute!!! i love it!!
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RetroOutro Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student Digital Artist
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! SO CUTE I AM DYING. ;^; That pizza drawing is adorable. I love it. Thank you for making and sharing this. 
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LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student General Artist
thx XD glad that you enjoy it
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Hetalia-England Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
This was really cute I liked it. :D
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LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student General Artist
thx XD
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