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FINALLY! I have succeed!! Sorry if it's too short for you, but this is just for the experiment. And I promise the next one will be longer and this time the main couple is Leo x Karai *squeal* >w< (I love this couple so much, I have my eyes on them before Donnie x April ^///^)

Anyway, sorry for those commission that I didn't hand them on time. Even I'm in the middle of the break, but the assignments are really killing me here. The teachers show no mercy, but what the heck, you gotta do what you gotta do. Making a dream comes true has to go through all these tests, am I right?

Nevertheless, hope you enjoy this little manga and leave any comment or suggestions in order to get myself improve and do better.

OH, I also want to thank :iconyuumei:'s tutorial of making a flash comic: THANK YOU!!!

And of course, you guys are one of my great moral support. And without you, I wouldn't continue my works on dA! I salute you!!!

NOTE: I hopefully can upload some Sonic works here, and please try to understand my situation.


Drawn and story by me :iconliyuconberma:

:icontmntplz: belongs to Mirage Studio and Nickelodeon!!
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:iconimatmntgal:
i absolutely love it! i mean it may have been short and let us wandering appen but it was amazing! i think it was good for a first one and i cannot wait to see your sequel for leonardo and karai! i really enjoyed it and such and i hope others do too! i think you should try giving the leo and karai one some ystery not as much as donnie and april because leo and karai are a mysterious couple but donnie and april are well liked. i am just so exited for the next one so do hurry!
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It's short, but the structure of each page is quite solid. The flow of the story isn't interrupted by disordered panel. I have no comment on the design and the drawing skill, since every lines seem to flow from an endless stream.

There's many opinion that support and against this couple, since the new series made it so obvious some people can't stand it, and I admit I'm one of them. But the subtlety in this one-shot had subdued it tremendously. a teenage love story doesn't have to be obvious to be cute and attractive. For those who support this couple, it'd quench their thirst for the couple's lovely moments...
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Hetalia-England Featured By Owner 1 day ago
This was really cute I liked it. :D
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legendthehedgehog Featured By Owner 1 day ago
im dying of cuteness today !!!
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XXxxWallFlowerxxXX Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
Yes...just...yes Neko Emoji-37 (Yay) [V2] Hamtaro Mouse Emoji-02 (Kawaii) [V1] Anna squee Llama Emoji-74 (My kawaii cheeks) [V4] Junko Enoshima (Kawaii Neko Girl) [V5] Hamtaro Mouse Emoji-03 (Squee) [V1] Elsa Sing Never Hamtaro Mouse Emoji-06 (Kawaii Dance) [V1] Bunny Emoji-77 (Melting) [V4] 
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LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks! Love all those icons you used there ^^
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XXxxWallFlowerxxXX Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
Allofmyyesssssssssssssssssssssss and no prob XD
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Animalove6 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
OMG I LOVE THIS SO MUCH :happybounce: :happybounce: :happybounce: :happybounce: :happybounce: La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la 
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LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks XD!
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silroccomet1 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
<3 <3 my heart melted, and then re-condenced just to melt again! LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE! 
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LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks XD!
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kyoshira71 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014
This is soo cute, awesome job on this.
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