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FINALLY! I have succeed!! Sorry if it's too short for you, but this is just for the experiment. And I promise the next one will be longer and this time the main couple is Leo x Karai *squeal* >w< (I love this couple so much, I have my eyes on them before Donnie x April ^///^)

Anyway, sorry for those commission that I didn't hand them on time. Even I'm in the middle of the break, but the assignments are really killing me here. The teachers show no mercy, but what the heck, you gotta do what you gotta do. Making a dream comes true has to go through all these tests, am I right?

Nevertheless, hope you enjoy this little manga and leave any comment or suggestions in order to get myself improve and do better.

OH, I also want to thank :iconyuumei:'s tutorial of making a flash comic: THANK YOU!!!

And of course, you guys are one of my great moral support. And without you, I wouldn't continue my works on dA! I salute you!!!

NOTE: I hopefully can upload some Sonic works here, and please try to understand my situation.


Drawn and story by me :iconliyuconberma:

:icontmntplz: belongs to Mirage Studio and Nickelodeon!!
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:iconimatmntgal:
i absolutely love it! i mean it may have been short and let us wandering appen but it was amazing! i think it was good for a first one and i cannot wait to see your sequel for leonardo and karai! i really enjoyed it and such and i hope others do too! i think you should try giving the leo and karai one some ystery not as much as donnie and april because leo and karai are a mysterious couple but donnie and april are well liked. i am just so exited for the next one so do hurry!
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It's short, but the structure of each page is quite solid. The flow of the story isn't interrupted by disordered panel. I have no comment on the design and the drawing skill, since every lines seem to flow from an endless stream.

There's many opinion that support and against this couple, since the new series made it so obvious some people can't stand it, and I admit I'm one of them. But the subtlety in this one-shot had subdued it tremendously. a teenage love story doesn't have to be obvious to be cute and attractive. For those who support this couple, it'd quench their thirst for the couple's lovely moments...
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Starz4Life Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
....where do Read it?
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:iconbuttergriffin332:
Buttergriffin332 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015  Student Artist
I LOVE ALL OF YOUR APRITELLO COMICS!!!
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:iconbuttergriffin332:
Buttergriffin332 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Student Artist
I LOVE THIS!! I WANT TO READ THE SEQUAL IF THERE IS ONE!!!
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:iconmew2fem:
Mew2fem Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wonderful job n so cute
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:iconmyo-chan:
myo-chan Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOvely, great Art, expresions and history~  
Thanks, its beautiful 
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:iconthepenvsthesword:
ThePenVsTheSword Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014  Student Writer
Aw, I love it!
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:icontmnttoysanddrawings:
TMNTtoysAndDrawings Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
SO CUTE i cry :)
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:iconjulian0123:
julian0123 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ok, that was really cute :3
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:iconcristal-the-kitty:
Cristal-the-kitty Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Cute!
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:icondonnieloveyou:
DonnieLoveYou Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014
Awwwwwwwwwww :3 beautifullllllll ♥♥♥ 
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:icondearheart2000:
DearHeart2000 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Student Interface Designer
i. love. this. 
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:iconlarafanvgc:
larafanVGC Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!
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:icondonnysgirl2001:
donnysgirl2001 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Professional Artist
love itLove Heart Love Heart - Free Pikachu Loves It Plz love power Love Tards  
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:iconrufflemutt:
RuffleMUTT Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014
I love fan art that feel natural for the show. Well done :)
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:icondconskjk:
DconsKJK Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014
Awww, so cute. Just perfectly innocent and sweet.
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:iconxsonamyloverx:
xsonamyloverx Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Student
adorable!!!!! 
other one please please please 
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:icondoublefuzz1:
doublefuzz1 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OHMTGOD I LOVE IT XDDD <333 FAVE!
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:iconvinnievannwham:
vinnievannwham Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
For some reason this won't come up on my phone. Is there any other way of me seeing this please?
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Student General Artist
Because it's swf file, so your phone can't read it. But i posted them as jpgs on my tumblr: liyuconberma.tumblr.com
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LittleGirlnin64 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014
I FREAKING LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUR WORKK!!!! SQUEAL!!! U captured Donnie and April so perfectly that I have already read this over a zillion times! And I only discovered your stuff today!! GREAT JOB! <3
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Snowflakeswin Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
Moreplease?
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:iconsnowflakeswin:
Snowflakeswin Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
More. Make more or I will find you.
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:iconiloveonceler88:
iloveonceler88 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh my gosh that was SO cute!!! i love it!!
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:iconretrooutro:
RetroOutro Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student Digital Artist
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! SO CUTE I AM DYING. ;^; That pizza drawing is adorable. I love it. Thank you for making and sharing this. 
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student General Artist
thx XD glad that you enjoy it
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:iconhetalia-england:
Hetalia-England Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
This was really cute I liked it. :D
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student General Artist
thx XD
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:iconlegendthehedgehog:
legendthehedgehog Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
im dying of cuteness today !!!
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student General Artist
thx XD
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XXxxWallFlowerxxXX Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
Yes...just...yes Neko Emoji-37 (Yay) [V2] Hamtaro Mouse Emoji-02 (Kawaii) [V1] Anna squee Llama Emoji-74 (My kawaii cheeks) [V4] Junko Enoshima (Kawaii Neko Girl) [V5] Hamtaro Mouse Emoji-03 (Squee) [V1] Elsa Sing Never Hamtaro Mouse Emoji-06 (Kawaii Dance) [V1] Bunny Emoji-77 (Melting) [V4] 
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks! Love all those icons you used there ^^
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XXxxWallFlowerxxXX Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
Allofmyyesssssssssssssssssssssss and no prob XD
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Animalove6 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
OMG I LOVE THIS SO MUCH :happybounce: :happybounce: :happybounce: :happybounce: :happybounce: La la la la La la la la La la la la La la la la 
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks XD!
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silroccomet1 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
<3 <3 my heart melted, and then re-condenced just to melt again! LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE! 
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks XD!
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:iconkyoshira71:
kyoshira71 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014
This is soo cute, awesome job on this.
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks XD!
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:iconkatanaberry:
KatanaBerry Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AWESOME!!!!! :XD::squee:
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks XD!
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:iconsonicmila:
SonicMila Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Student Digital Artist
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student General Artist
XD
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:iconsonicmila:
SonicMila Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Student Digital Artist
:P
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:iconroantovica:
roantovica Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
kawaaai is soooo cute i  LOVE IT!!!
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks XD!
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:iconthegeekydalek:
TheGeekyDalek Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014
cute <3
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks XD!
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:icondream-angel-artista:
Dream-Angel-Artista Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Professional Artisan Crafter
XD LOOOOOOOOOOOOL that was verrry soo coool!
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks XD!
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Dream-Angel-Artista Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Professional Artisan Crafter
your welcome!!
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