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Maria's First Christmas Pg6-7 by LiyuConberma Maria's First Christmas Pg6-7 by LiyuConberma
Alrighty!! This time I make it TWO PAGES!! >w<

ENJOY and REVIEW (or CRITIQUE)!!

MERRY CHRISTMAS!!! AND GOD BLESS US EVERYONE! AND PEACE ON EARTH!!

Story Plot:

Ever since Maria was back on living as a hedgehog, she had a wonderful life. And soon, Christmas is coming and it would be her very first Christmas on Earth. Shadow, who is now Maria's boyfriend, intended to make the best Christmas she would ever remember, everyone wanted to.

What would they do to make the Christmas special? Will things go well the way they plan?

Apparently not, (not gonna to make it too smooth) as things need to be a little bit more interesting....



Couples will be appear:

Sonic x Sally
Shadow x Maria (mainly)
Silver x Blaze
Knuckles x Rouge
Tails x Cream
Vector x Vanilla (slightly)
Manic x Amy (slightly)


Cover: Maria's First Christmas Cover by LiyuConberma

Previous Page: Maria's First Christmas Pg5 by LiyuConberma

Next Pages: Maria's First Christmas Pg8-9 by LiyuConberma


Sonic, Shadow, Silver, Maria Robotnik and other characters are owned by :iconsegaplz:

Hedgehog vers of Maria owned by me :iconliyuconberma:!!
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:iconrphedgie:
A TOTAL comedy! I LOVE IT!!! Silver tries to convince Sonic that he should take it seriously, and i respect that! i would do that too! Cause who knows what Sonic can do? XD And Shadow's sayin that he doesn't like the nickname, but Sonic doesn't care, he does it anyway! Shadow's just shy of sayin what he's gonna say, but, again, Sonic doesn't care. And Sonic's faces, PRICELESS! The colors really made it pop, the shading made it more realistic, and the poses, AWESOME! Plus, I thought Silver's shoes were black instead of green. o.O but that doesn't matter. I still love it. XD
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:iconprid3m:
The characters are very close to the original design, some little tiny flaws, but nothing really important. Their expressions are communicating exactly their mood, which makes it really funny and pleasant to read. Jokes fit as well with the context, and of course, colours are wonderful. You know well how to work with light and shadows and master well the art of building comics.
Putting two pages at a time is also interesting, it beginning a subject and ending the page with a punch line that will allow you to continue the same fact in another deviation.

Keep up the good work, you're getting better and better.
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scourgemightyfan Featured By Owner Edited Mar 5, 2015  New member
Why should i tell you?
Cuz we bothe know im a stubborn hedgehog
....fine
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!!!!
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:icon1dragonlover:
1dragonlover Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol!!
Loved the dialogue and Sonic's face in the last panel is hilarious!!
Clap Love 
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:iconsonicpokemonandspyro:
XD And even sonic amits he's stubborn to 
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:iconnova2711:
Nova2711 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Student General Artist
Lol silver's face. :-) you are the best and no one else comes near it. :D
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GothicFear836 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014
Your drawing style is similar to that of the comic books. However, just a word of advice. Don't claim ownership of an official character of the sonic genre. Maria may be in a different form but she doesn't belong to you. So if an Archie/Sega artist/writer/employee see's this they may sue you just for claiming ownership of the character. Instead, how about you just claim ownership of the pic/design? Cuz everyone has their own versions of a reincarnated Maria Robotnik. Don't get me wrong, like ths comic. I'm just trying to save you from a potential Lawsuit.
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Student General Artist
Good point, thanks for the advice. I'll just change that I own the design of Maria.
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:icongothicfear836:
GothicFear836 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014
:P Can't wait for the next page of your comic. I love it. :D
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:iconcaird56:
caird56 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you are stubborn sonic 
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Student General Artist
XD
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:iconcaird56:
caird56 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i love all you art its awesome
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:icondragonking17:
Dragonking17 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I've just stumbled on to this and I love it already. 
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Student General Artist
Xd thx
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:icondragonking17:
Dragonking17 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome. 
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:iconwerehogdog:
werehogdog Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
Great page! I was so surprised when Shadow didn't hurt Sonic!
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Student General Artist
thx
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:iconwerehogdog:
werehogdog Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014
You're welcome:happybounce: 
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:iconcamolotthe10:
camolotthe10 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
a nice comic, art style that reminds me of the original Sonic comics...
and all the characters actually acted like themselves.
you have no idea how much i appreciated that.
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Student General Artist
thx, glad that you enjoy it
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:iconluciaalejos:
LuciaAlejos Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Student General Artist
:( I WANT SONAMY (I dont hate Sally, but I hate when people put her together with Sonic :( )
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Student General Artist
I'm not a fan of sonamy, sry
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:iconpsfreak2012:
PSfreak2012 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Professional Artist
Awesome comic!
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks!
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:icontimmcjimfrompl:
TimMcJimFromPl Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014
I love this comic.
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks! XD
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:icontimmcjimfrompl:
TimMcJimFromPl Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
Your welcome.
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:iconsonicfull:
SonicFull Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
shadow this is the reason why tails moved out,living with Dee. ( well I wonder how many people are going to realize I'm making a Dexter's Lab reference?)
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Student General Artist
XD
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:icondarkspeeds:
darkspeeds Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This comic is too cute. X3
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Student General Artist
Oh hey, man. Long time no chat/see. What's up to u? Hope you enjoyed your Christmas and New Years Eve. Thanks for the comment!
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:icondarkspeeds:
darkspeeds Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Heya!

Well let's see, I just finished my first semester at the Academy of Art university, had a wonderful X-mas and New Years, I'm paving my way for an internship at Archie Publications this Summer 2014 and I'm currently working on this project - darkspeeds.deviantart.com/jour…

Hope you had an awesome holiday too. Feel free to contribute towards the project - it's a once in a lifetime opportunity to say thanks to Tracy Yardley in a pretty special way. 8-) It's also a nice way to get your work featured to Archie staff.
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Student General Artist
Gasp! Awesome! I'm signing up, but hopefully I'd get chosen! >w< Ooohhhh, I'm soooo excited! I better start it right now! I'm apply for an internship for Archie too, do you know how to?
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:icondarkspeeds:
darkspeeds Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Excellent, I'm looking forward to your submission - I'm confident that it'll be picked. ;)

Make sure it's related to the Pirate Plunder Panic arc or if you must you can give Sonic Rush Adventure a go as the theme. 

Regarding the internship you'd have to apply when they announce it - check the Archiecomics.com blog from time to time. Alternatively go to the Comic Cons they host each year in San Diego or New York - meet up with the editors as ask questions that will help assist in your chances of making it into Archie. *thumbs up*
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks for the info, but I'm not sure if I able to go to Comic con since I live in Canada plus other plans during those time. But speaking of pirate plunder, is it allow to give Blaze and the others their outfit (like the ones from "off panel" at the end of SU issue 55)? 
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:icondarkspeeds:
darkspeeds Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Do whatever you think will please Tracy, it's going to be a book dedicated to him. ;) (and yeah I reckon that's a pretty sweet idea (those were Aleah's idea's actually, script wise and Chibi-hen's designs illustration-wise)m so yeah go for it! *thumbs up*)
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Student General Artist
Sweet! Already got several ideas right now. So it's ok that I submit more than one or two entries, just have to make sure? ^^
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:iconsonicfangirl8221:
sonicfangirl8221 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Student Artist
Awesome
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks!
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:iconkahl89:
Kahl89 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Student Filmographer
Always Sonic LOL
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Student General Artist
XD classic, huh?
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:iconxr66:
xr66 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Student Photographer
cool story :iconmnrthumbsupplz: 
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks!
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:iconxr66:
xr66 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Student Photographer
hahahaha poor shadow CURSE YOU! 
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Student General Artist
XD
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ApplePencil Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Student General Artist
Wow I enjoyed reading this SO MUUCH! it wa pretty funny and your character portrayal is so accurate! Specially on Sonic! 

In my opinion, I think Shadow is more of those that., when upset, stands on a corner with his back leaned on the wall staring at a window or something. He's not of those showing feelings I think :giggle:

However, that is just muy point of view, you can portray any character as you wish! Good work, and I expect to see more of this series ^^ 
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Student General Artist
Awww, thanks, I still will continue this comic, hope you and the others will continue follow watching this comic. ^^
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Student Writer
I really do like the expressions.  Could use a bit of work on some spelling, like with "mopping" in the first panel, but otherwise, you did a fantastic job.
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks, I'll keep that in mind. ^^
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:iconshuyintheenigmatic:
ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Student Writer
Welcome!  ^^
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Gina1991 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG!! I really love it. I think Im in love .... with your comic. :3
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks!
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