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LET IT FLOW TMNT FANCOMIC ANNOUNCEMENT! by LiyuConberma LET IT FLOW TMNT FANCOMIC ANNOUNCEMENT! by LiyuConberma
FOR THE FIRST TIME EVER I COOPERATE WITH A WRITER AND AN ARTIST ON THIS SITE!! ^W^

You surely don't want to miss this!!

The guests of this project are :iconflashyfashionfraud: (One of the greatest writers I've ever heard, check out her DonniexApril fanfics especially) and :iconjasminealexandra: (love her coloring skills and her artworks at first sight)


Created by :iconliyuconberma:
Written by :iconflashyfashionfraud:
Colored by :iconjasminealexandra:



TMNT BELONGS TO MIRAGE STUDIO AND NICKELODEON ANIMATION!



This will be a flash comic as well. So I won't submit the comic page by page but until we finish it and

I know that I promise that LeoxKarai comicwould be next (the sketches are nearly done btw), but don't worry, this announcement will be next soon once I finish coloring its cover. ^w^

For now, hope you are looking forward for this story. By the way, a new long series of TMNT fanfic would be announced soon...
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:iconaddictedtopunk:
First of all, congratulations, I read in your comments you were very happy to participate in this project ^^

About the titles and fonts. If someone wants to promote something, the best way to do it is using just one color, one type of font, one type of anything. Here you use 3 different fonts, with 6 different colors and backgrounds for each text.
The Donnie&April in white (very shiny white, uncomfortable to read) with the pink/purple mixed texture heart. The Let it flow. Twisted, purple and shiny yellow, and the Coming Soon, in yellow and cyan (this colors together are hard to read and hurts your eyes, sorry if it sounds mean) that yo don't want to read because is fluorescent, AND the black and purple baclground.
Is like a carnival of colors and styles. Compare your composition with a poster of some advertising. You'll see is designed with a few typos, few fonts and colors, easy to remember and most important easy to link with something.
For example if I say "red and white" you think in Coke, or Colgate immediatly. That's the idea of promotion, try to make people remember your product ^^

May you ask why I'm talking too much about fonts, because is the first thing i noticed.

The drawings seems much better because of the shadows, the dynamism of this two characters falling with style(xD), perspectives and proportions looks very well too.
The only think I can't understand very well is how Donatello hold her, or how she holds to him. If someone details seems there's no much conections between the bodies. At first i though he was holding her like the typical hero pose, but then i see his arms are up. If is a love story the expectator loves to know these two like each others and want to see conections, but here is very confusing.

Hope you don't find this too mean, is hard for me to write the critic exactly as I think because english is not my mother language but I hope you understand it and apreciate it. Again congratulations for the project, seems interesting.
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:iconbadassbutch:
Awesome comic! I love how developed you've made April! She's a very strong, capable and interesting character, and it really comes through in your story! Keep up the good work! :)
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LiyuConberma Nov 2, 2013  Student General Artist
Awww, thanks, just so you know, the comic Let it flow is already out, don't know if you have seen it already.
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:iconcsatcat:
I am a huge fan of this couple. I also enjoy all the partners working on this. I hope it will be done soon, but I understand that everyone has other things to do.

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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Aug 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Don't worry, now it's only two last pages left! ^^
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:iconsyizumakai:
SyIzumakai Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love both of the co-workers on this project and I love your art. THIS IS GOING TO BE EPIC!!!
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Aug 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks, I'm sure hope you guys will enjoy this!
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:iconjasminealexandra:
JasmineAlexandra Jul 23, 2013  Student General Artist
I am back now.... so if you want, please let me know... I want to make more! I am so excited for this comic! :happybounce:
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Jul 23, 2013  Student General Artist
OMG, so glad to hear you back. I just came back recently too. And don't worry, I will work on those comic pages and send them to you! Again, welcome back!! And I, too, excited for the result!! >w< *squeal*

Lemme know if you have any question! XD
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WhiteTiger246 Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I look forward to the rest. :library: 
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Aug 18, 2013  Student General Artist
^w^
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