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About the titles and fonts. If someone wants to promote something, the best way to do it is using just one color, one type of font, one type of anything. Here you use 3 different fonts, with 6 different colors and backgrounds for each text.
The Donnie&April in white (very shiny white, uncomfortable to read) with the pink/purple mixed texture heart. The Let it flow. Twisted, purple and shiny yellow, and the Coming Soon, in yellow and cyan (this colors together are hard to read and hurts your eyes, sorry if it sounds mean) that yo don't want to read because is fluorescent, AND the black and purple baclground.
Is like a carnival of colors and styles. Compare your composition with a poster of some advertising. You'll see is designed with a few typos, few fonts and colors, easy to remember and most important easy to link with something.
For example if I say "red and white" you think in Coke, or Colgate immediatly. That's the idea of promotion, try to make people remember your product ^^
May you ask why I'm talking too much about fonts, because is the first thing i noticed.
The drawings seems much better because of the shadows, the dynamism of this two characters falling with style(xD), perspectives and proportions looks very well too.
The only think I can't understand very well is how Donatello hold her, or how she holds to him. If someone details seems there's no much conections between the bodies. At first i though he was holding her like the typical hero pose, but then i see his arms are up. If is a love story the expectator loves to know these two like each others and want to see conections, but here is very confusing.
Hope you don't find this too mean, is hard for me to write the critic exactly as I think because english is not my mother language but I hope you understand it and apreciate it. Again congratulations for the project, seems interesting.
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