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LET IT FLOW TMNT FANCOMIC ANNOUNCEMENT! by LiyuConberma LET IT FLOW TMNT FANCOMIC ANNOUNCEMENT! by LiyuConberma
FOR THE FIRST TIME EVER I COOPERATE WITH A WRITER AND AN ARTIST ON THIS SITE!! ^W^

You surely don't want to miss this!!

The guests of this project are :iconflashyfashionfraud: (One of the greatest writers I've ever heard, check out her DonniexApril fanfics especially) and :iconjasminealexandra: (love her coloring skills and her artworks at first sight)


Created by :iconliyuconberma:
Written by :iconflashyfashionfraud:
Colored by :iconjasminealexandra:



TMNT BELONGS TO MIRAGE STUDIO AND NICKELODEON ANIMATION!



This will be a flash comic as well. So I won't submit the comic page by page but until we finish it and

I know that I promise that LeoxKarai comicwould be next (the sketches are nearly done btw), but don't worry, this announcement will be next soon once I finish coloring its cover. ^w^

For now, hope you are looking forward for this story. By the way, a new long series of TMNT fanfic would be announced soon...
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:iconaddictedtopunk:
First of all, congratulations, I read in your comments you were very happy to participate in this project ^^

About the titles and fonts. If someone wants to promote something, the best way to do it is using just one color, one type of font, one type of anything. Here you use 3 different fonts, with 6 different colors and backgrounds for each text.
The Donnie&April in white (very shiny white, uncomfortable to read) with the pink/purple mixed texture heart. The Let it flow. Twisted, purple and shiny yellow, and the Coming Soon, in yellow and cyan (this colors together are hard to read and hurts your eyes, sorry if it sounds mean) that yo don't want to read because is fluorescent, AND the black and purple baclground.
Is like a carnival of colors and styles. Compare your composition with a poster of some advertising. You'll see is designed with a few typos, few fonts and colors, easy to remember and most important easy to link with something.
For example if I say "red and white" you think in Coke, or Colgate immediatly. That's the idea of promotion, try to make people remember your product ^^

May you ask why I'm talking too much about fonts, because is the first thing i noticed.

The drawings seems much better because of the shadows, the dynamism of this two characters falling with style(xD), perspectives and proportions looks very well too.
The only think I can't understand very well is how Donatello hold her, or how she holds to him. If someone details seems there's no much conections between the bodies. At first i though he was holding her like the typical hero pose, but then i see his arms are up. If is a love story the expectator loves to know these two like each others and want to see conections, but here is very confusing.

Hope you don't find this too mean, is hard for me to write the critic exactly as I think because english is not my mother language but I hope you understand it and apreciate it. Again congratulations for the project, seems interesting.
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:iconbadassbutch:
BadAssButch Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013
Awesome comic! I love how developed you've made April! She's a very strong, capable and interesting character, and it really comes through in your story! Keep up the good work! :)
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Student General Artist
Awww, thanks, just so you know, the comic Let it flow is already out, don't know if you have seen it already.
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:iconcsatcat:
Csatcat Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
I am a huge fan of this couple. I also enjoy all the partners working on this. I hope it will be done soon, but I understand that everyone has other things to do.

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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Don't worry, now it's only two last pages left! ^^
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:iconsyizumakai:
SyIzumakai Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love both of the co-workers on this project and I love your art. THIS IS GOING TO BE EPIC!!!
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks, I'm sure hope you guys will enjoy this!
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:iconjasminealexandra:
JasmineAlexandra Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Student General Artist
I am back now.... so if you want, please let me know... I want to make more! I am so excited for this comic! :happybounce:
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Student General Artist
OMG, so glad to hear you back. I just came back recently too. And don't worry, I will work on those comic pages and send them to you! Again, welcome back!! And I, too, excited for the result!! >w< *squeal*

Lemme know if you have any question! XD
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:iconwhitetiger246:
WhiteTiger246 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I look forward to the rest. :library: 
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student General Artist
^w^
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:iconjusticef:
JusticeF Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
When will it come????????
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Soon, my friend, for it's only two last pages left! ^^
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:iconjusticef:
JusticeF Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok
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:iconmeme4evar:
MeMe4evar Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
Oohh I can't wait I wna c I wna c opp lessss I luve them as a cute sweet couple I'm meme by the way hey ^_^
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student General Artist
^w^
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:iconsylviene:
SylvieNe Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Is this still coming out? :(
I've been patiently waiting. ^^ Thought I'd ask if anything happened...
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Student General Artist
Because I'm currently out of country, so I can't continue my works and send them to the other to color them. Sry for the delay.
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:iconsylviene:
SylvieNe Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh okay, it will still be made? :D
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Student General Artist
yep
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:iconjusticef:
JusticeF Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
good job but when is the comic comming
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Soon! THAT I guarantee! ^^
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:iconjusticef:
JusticeF Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok
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:iconvallylight:
Vallylight Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
COOL!!!
BIG FAN OF DONNIE X APRIL!!!
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks, same! ^^ And also Leo and Karai!
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:iconvallylight:
Vallylight Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
DONNIE X APRIL!!! NO Capril!!!
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:icondonatellolover23:
donatellolover23 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
when is is coming?
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student General Artist
SOON!
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:iconleslie28:
leslie28 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
please tell me when you post this comic out I love this couple and TMNT.
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student General Artist
I will post this like I did with the previous DonxApril comic!
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:iconleslie28:
leslie28 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh yeah I forget well I hope it doesn't take forever.
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student General Artist
don't worry, it's only two last pages left. ^^
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:iconleslie28:
leslie28 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ok what how many pages are you doing?
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Hmm, the whole story is 12 pages in total.
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:iconleslie28:
leslie28 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow
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:iconsapphiremiujewel:
SapphireMiuJewel Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconbummiesplz: AWESOME!!~ Can't wait!~ >w<
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks! ^^
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:iconsapphiremiujewel:
SapphireMiuJewel Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're Welcome!~
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:icondonatellolover23:
donatellolover23 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
when is coming out?
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Student General Artist
well, because the coloring artist is out of the country and will be back by May, but I won't be here from May to July, so this comic would be delayed, sry.
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:iconawesomeanimegamer360:
AwesomeAnimeGamer360 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome!!!!! Cant wait 2 c it!!!!!:icondummywooplz:
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks!
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:iconprincesscookiedough:
princessCookiedough Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
NO! NEVER!
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:iconshadamy20:
shadamy20 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013
I can;t wait
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:iconcrimsonbloodbender88:
I didnt see a release date? When do you release it?
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Here's the problem, the coloring artist has to leave the country for a while for the school. So this project has been delayed, sorry.
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:iconcrimsonbloodbender88:
Was must be, must be.
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:iconsupersayian5naruto:
SuperSayian5Naruto Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i like TMNT but i dint watch it very much but i do like this couple donnie x april
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:iconhottieroxs:
hottieroxs Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013
when will it come out????
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:iconliyuconberma:
LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Student General Artist
Sadly, the coloring artist will be leaving the country for some reason for a month, so this comic will be delayed. Sry TT^TT
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:icondonatellolover23:
donatellolover23 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
omg omg omg omg omg *FANGIRL SCREAM* :squee:cant fregging wait!!!! i bet it gonna b awesome :hooray:!!!! plz plz plz keep me posted on the let it flow comic and fanfics :please:
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